Three Minute Contest

[jackshoegazer]

This was written as a challenge to write a poem in three minutes. This one took about four. Shit.

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"Three Verse Ego, Four Line Loss"

In the end of surreal mess,
I stress the death of lost abscess,
Black as pitch and wide as white,
A mighty might reveres this fight.

A lamb of passion, sacraficial incision,
To weigh on this weight, the instant decision,
Alas, I arrive through long night's ride,
A rumbling stilleto still lodged inside.

Pay the piper, the Lord of Paper,
Noxious smoke and inhaled vapor,
The light of the candle lancing his saddle,
I'm up mystic river with-out a paddle.

(C)2004 JJP

Comments

[moonshinekat.livejournal.com]

roses are red testicles shouldn't be blue its windy outside it makes me go boo hoo


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